My Social Teacher
I have a social teacher. Her full mane is Reny Indrias Kuntari. We usually call her Mrs. Reny. She is about 46 years old. She lives at Plandi utara 62 Jombang.
She has a tall and slim body. She is a beautiful and fashionable person. She also has a pointed nose and bright skin. Her hair is long, straight, and black. She has sharp and bright eyes.
Mrs. Reny is very friendly, cheerful, and funny person. She is also patient. She has a good personality, she is nice and kind. She is not so serious person, she likes kidding when she teaches us.
Mrs. Reny is always able to help every student who have some problems in social subject. I like the way she teaches us, because she can make social lesson feels easy and interesting. It is also excited, that’s why many students like her very much. Mrs. Reny is also the most favorite teacher in Junior High School 2 Jombang 3 times.
Mrs. Reny is really a good teacher.
Good job, Almira!
BalasHapusIt's a good text Almira, but you need to edit some parts on it:
BalasHapus1. social teacher(line 1): Social science teacher
2. have.. (line 9) : has
3. Delete the word "feel" (line 11)
4. Excited (line 11): Exciting
5. The last sentence: Mrs. Reny has ever been the most favorite....for three times.
OK, go on posting the other texts!
Yes mam,, i will edit this as soon as possible,,,
BalasHapusand i have finished my duty,,
i have posted my third text,, check it out..!!
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